Проверьте доклад!Не надо писать, что у меня все правильно, потому что я уверенна что есть ошибки и такие ответы буду удалять!нужно написать в формальном стиле)и еще:через переводчик я и сама в состоянии проверить!.Introductions.The aim of this report is to suggest ways to improve the flats in which we live, to make them safer and more pleasant to live in. 2.Security.There is a risk that we would steal in their owapartments. Therefore, it would be advisable to install surveillance camras in the corridors and hallways. I am sure that be common efforts we will be able to collect the necessary funds to purchase them. 3.Fucilities. Firstly, I would strongly recommended to equip every room, Internet, so students can easily find the necessary information. Secondly, it wouldbe nice to allocate a room for living room, so we could go there and relax after a hard day, communicating with each other and plaing Board games. In addition, you can buy in every room, a small writing table. 4.General Environment. Unfortunately our rooms are badly lit and they already been overhaul. The wall should be painted ceiling whitewashed, you can hand a new chandelier with multiple light. Another proposal put more pots of flowers on the window-sills, so they were eye. 5.Conclusion. Overall, I believe that many will support me. I think that together we can make our room safer and more pleasant to stay.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Лучший ответ на вопрос «Проверьте доклад!Не надо писать, что у меня все правильно, потому что я уверенна что есть ошибки и такие ответы буду удалять!нужно написать в формальном стиле)и еще:через переводчик я и сама в состоянии проверить!.Introductions.The aim of this report is to suggest ways to improve the flats in which we live, to make them safer and more pleasant to live in. 2.Security.There is a risk that we would steal in their owapartments. Therefore, it would be advisable to install surveillance camras in the corridors and hallways. I am sure that be common efforts we will be able to collect the necessary funds to purchase them. 3.Fucilities. Firstly, I would strongly recommended to equip every room, Internet, so students can easily find the necessary information. Secondly, it wouldbe nice to allocate a room for living room, so we could go there and relax after a hard day, communicating with each other and plaing Board games. In addition, you can buy in every room, a small writing table. 4.General Environment. Unfortunately our rooms are badly lit and they already been overhaul. The wall should be painted ceiling whitewashed, you can hand a new chandelier with multiple light. Another proposal put more pots of flowers on the window-sills, so they were eye. 5.Conclusion. Overall, I believe that many will support me. I think that together we can make our room safer and more pleasant to stay.» от пользователя Алена Луговская в разделе Английский язык. Задавайте вопросы и делитесь своими знаниями.